Sunday, 2 November 2014

Pyaar vali arrange story..!!


It was on 17th Oct 2014, the very first day he met her. Actually, he was lost in his ex’s thoughts. May be he was special and he needed someone very special. ’Beta come let’s go’ his father said. He paused for a second and replied, ‘Yes dad! Coming’. He answered monotonically to his dad. ‘Tanay just cheer up. We are going to see a girl for you. We’ll proceed only when you’ll be comfortable’ said his mom adjusting his collar. But still, time was flowing very heavily for him. His expressions had that grief of his past which was buried alive. Yet to satisfy his parents, he destroyed his expressions and decided to opt for an arrange marriage. ‘Mrs. Patel welcome’ said the girl’s mother welcoming Tanay and his family. Tanay with an abrupt smile, moved inside the pavilion. 
‘And what do you do beta?’ asked the girl’s father. ‘Uncle, I’m working for a web developing company’ he replied. And the conversations continued ahead. So, families met and those talks exchanged. Seconds later, the girl stepped down from the staircase. Dressed in a red brocade saree and elegant red ear drops, she headed downstairs. A very mischievous yet very calm smile made her isolated. Tanay who was looking down  immediately  saw her reflection on the glass table and  all he could do was just stare at her. This was that moment, when he actually glanced at her and realized that somehow the rest of the world got vanished when she stepped towards him. But, when she glanced at him, her curled hair created distraction and she was trying to adjust her hair at the back of her ear. But, Tanay was still glancing at her and there was no going back from her and his gut feeling that she was someone special whom he was searching made him to conquer the world. Then after this, she stepped towards her family and she blushed in innocence and looked patiently at him. ‘This is our daughter, Aakruti’ her father spoke. I must say, ’Your daughter is your reflection Mrs. Shah’ said Mrs. Patel to Mrs. Shah. Tanay now could feel his heart bouncing…he could very easily hear his heart beating rapidly. But, he had no option then to stare her shiny black eyes. There was surely something that was making him mesmerize, rather more than that his not so natural smile changed to that natural smile perceiving a sense of his own worth. But, suddenly his thoughts all disappeared when his heart rushed to his ex.
He immediately shifted his gaze towards her father and replied, ’Uncle if you don’t mind can I have a talk with Aakruti alone’ he asked in nervousness. Her father gave him the permission to be alone with a stranger who may be or may not be tied together through their own destinies. Then both of them  walked together near the balcony. ‘So Aakruti…how are you?’ he asked in nervousness. ‘All fine Tanay’ she said glazing at him. He more strongly started feeling for her, but he resisted to look at her this time. ‘So, how did you get ready for this arrange marriage?’ he asked. ‘Because I wanted to go with my parent’s decision. And what about you?’ she answered taking a pause.’ Ohh that’s a very big story Aakruti! But, I’m here because of my false ‘ex’  relationship‘ he said taking a moment off. She looked at him with an attempt to expect an answer, but he paused for few minutes. He then cleared his throat and said,’ Ahem ahem.... I know that I need to move on, but I was in a false relationship. The girl whom I dated for 2 years in US, actually dated another guy. I knew that she was cheating me, still I extended my hand waiting for her, but somewhere she didn’t wanted to return and I was left all alone’ saying this his eyes got moist. She noticed this and handled him the glass of water. 



‘I’m sorry I don’t know why I wanted to share this with you, but there was something that reflected you and your purity in my heart’ he said now gazing confidently at her. She smiled cheerfully and fell for his sincerity. ‘Come let’s go!’ she said looking at him. ’But, what about your decision Aakruti?’ he asked. ‘Tanay, I got impressed with you and your sincerity and it’s just enough for me to know that how difficult you’ve been through your past relationship. Yes, I have not been through any relationship, but I came to know about that love and break- up startegies through your world’ she said blinking softly at him. ‘Means you don’t have any issues with my past Aakruti?’ he questioned. ‘I came to know about your love and your feelings. They are far important for me to live with you very cheerfully. Any girl would be lucky  to live with you forever’ she said blushing at his gaze. His world started glowing in amorous happiness. Everything, rather everything froze for a second and this tiny span of knowing her created fluctuations in his heart. ‘So, don’t you have any problem with my past?’ he questioned. ‘Still, you didn’t get the answer Tanay? ‘She asked smiling with shyness and confidence.  Tanay had many feelings now….and his heart was now carved with the name ‘Aakruti’. He was now very vivaciously looking at her because now he was sure that she was his someone special whom his parents wanted to meet. Her little nose was shining in vivid dreams and her lips; they draw his attention very gracefully. And now there were only lyrics that could impart the sweetest start of this relationship…And then, this new ‘PYAAR VALI ARRANGED STORY’  ended with a wedding knot tied by destiny…


Reviews needed guys,,, in the forms of comments...Comment, only if u feel something very familiar to your own world...

49 comments:

  1. Hey that what I am waiting for... awesome

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  2. love story once again guyzzz .... amazing story...thats a boy thing....n graphics .... heaven ....

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  3. I'm speechless. you're an amazing writer and reading this made me feel like I was by your side the entire time...

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  4. Nice! Sweet!
    Do give it a final review next time.

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  5. Mindblowing graphics n story.. pyaar vali love story.. lovely

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  6. I have been following you for awhile but just now read your love story. I have to say, it is the most beautiful love story I have ever read

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  7. O... M... G... What an AMAZING love story.

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  8. Wow.. It is quite simply.. Wonderful :).. Liane

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  9. Good job guyzz... again the magical experience... WOW

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  10. Hey hi Jack here, this totally new concept.... its really good , wonderful, awesome .. i want to work with you guyzzz..

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  11. Super Blockbuster like movie experience.. balanced graphics & content

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  12. this story similar to my one...

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  13. I loved your story...I've never been in love before...I really hope the day I find the 'right person' my story is at least half as romantic as yours... beautiful concept, story, images... overall fantastic

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  14. I have just stumbled across your blog and I was simply hypnotize by your love story & graphics. This is really a new concept of blog writing... general blog means text reading. but you guyzz change the meaning of blog writing..

    Rebecca

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  15. You write so beautifully. I enjoyed reading this, felt like I was reading a novel on a beach with my toes in the sand. You should think about writing a book. I'd definitely read it and by the looks of it lots of other people would too. :)

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  16. Just discovered your blog and thought I would glance over it--did not expect to find myself engrossed in such a cute love story :) Your writing is great, graphics are wonderful, both fun and easy to read. Love this blog, so glad I found it!..Kristine

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  17. This is the best love story I have ever read, hands down! This is the kind of plot you only see in movies. Love your writing style, too. You should consider writing a romance novel or something! and your supporting graphics....GORGEOUS......I'm excited to read more!

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  18. accidentally started reading your blog ... it's great. Usually blogs devote a maximum of 5 minutes of my time, but your blog ... I still read it, there are so many positive emotions.

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  19. truly astonishing

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  20. I just ran across your blog and might I add that this is one of the BEST posts that I have ever read. I am so encouraged by your story. I love what you said about boyzz emotions & that is exactly where I am at now. Waiting and wondering is a tough place to be in though. Again, your story is absolutely beautiful and I wish you all the best !!!

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  21. SSS : Sweet Short Story

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  22. Still, you didn’t get the answer Tanay? ‘She asked smiling with shyness and confidence....amazing moment..

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  23. its full of emotions, feelings, reality, i love the way you describe & present through your graphics & content.

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  24. Tanay & Akruti.... Hit Story

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  25. I dont think i need to mention the same again...
    The no. of comments here is a proof of how beautiful and loving the story is..
    Excellent!

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  26. I am in love with your story and graphic once again..

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  27. Rocking story like phir le aaya dil.. hats off to you both guyzz.. keep it up

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  28. I think apki sari stories ko milake ek amazing book ready kar sakte hai... :)

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  29. I am new to your blog..now i bcm a gr8 fan of u r s

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  30. How greate imagination power you have... i am speachless

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  31. How greate imagination power you have... i am speachless

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  32. Is it true story?

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  33. Hey guyssss......Thank you so much for ol ur interactions and suggestions....We are blessed to have these many readers who have been consistently supporting us through these many phases....thankuu n till then keep reading...love yaa...!! ;)

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  34. i like your new section "Send your stories"....its new

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  35. Good writing style

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  36. as compare to pyaar vali love story... your awesome

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  37. arrange marriages... really unbearable... but the way to define & show its lovely

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  38. I think everyone loves a good love story. I remember as a child dreaming about how God would write my story, who I would marry, how he would ask me out, our first kiss. It is so funny to look back on the last few years and laugh about how it was all so different than I imagined... Shiyana

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  39. I love love love it. It reminds me SO much of My husband and my story!!! His dad was setting up an arranged marriage way before too!! God truly does work in the most incredible ways, blows my mind!!...Joshua and Kristen

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  40. Such a sweet love story. The Lord is definitely creative & all wonderful things are in His timing. Thanks for sharing. I always enjoy reading love stories!

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  41. Hey, found your blog via my friend. :) Love your story....sounds similar to me and my hubby....not sure if you both like each other/ "just friends"/dating period, and then the best part of all marriage! :) What you said is so very true! God puts those desires in our hearts and He fulfills them by putting the right person there. :) Just like a piece of a puzzle seriously! My hubby is EXACTLY what I was sooo earnestly praying for all my life!..thanks for sharing

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  42. Love such stories good work

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  43. Magisch Erfahrung..Keep it up

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  44. This may just be the most beautiful thing I’ve ever read about Marriage. Thank you for taking the time to share your gift of writing with others.

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  45. I keep your blog on my list of favorites. You make my heart smile. Thank you! This is a beautiful post... Writing, Graphics everything.. thanks

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  46. A very touching story. I think it's great that you're being realistic and making yourself behave as his best friend just because that's what friends do. No matter how hard it is.

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