Thursday, 9 October 2014

”Jab koi baat bigad jayee”...!! 3


Both Sneha and Dhruv talked silently with their hearts. Sneha had hundred of things that chased her  heart. This time, she didn’t think of her, she only thought of Dhruv. Soon after this, the clouds poured anxious yet endless curtains of tears from the heaven. May be, it was appropriate, but they didn’t notice the drop falling because it made their inner hearts pour harder. It was a white noise which was not purely empty, rather silence filled the atmosphere. Yes it was rain, rain that was sadder still, yet it had many emotions. Dhruv who was deep in his thoughts, still noticed something. He looked to his right and saw Sneha completely drenched. Her hair got entangled with water and she appeared like that morning mist which only had fresh charm of innocence.  Her saree appeared so comforting as if it was wrapping her with silence and her face had that shinning reflection which was missing in the past. But, this rain made the cold breeze groove her body and she started shivering. Dhruv covered her arms with his jacket and again his gaze shifted to her. Her glossy lips had few water droplets which made her look more charming and most important he noticed her eyes. Her eyes were raining deeply with those dark fears and wounds which were difficult to get healed. Dhruv caught her tears in his palm and both shared an intense eyelock towards each other. This tear was so precious for him as if it had the life’s agony of her pain and struggle. He wanted to render her wounds by his pious love. He wanted her to make so strong that no one can again penetrate her wounded heart. He wanted to take revenge from the one who made her very delicate; physically, mentally and emotionally. It was very harder, may be harder than his death, but still those tears brought words to his love. 
It seemed as if both had love for each other, but it appeared as if both of them have learned that silence has a quality and dimension all its own. The blowing wind was adding feelings to the word and the world. As it was stopped raining, the sky got occupied with a diamond moon and stars.  May be sometimes it cannot be as simple as to let go your universe which demanded only love and enough feelings. She stood up and walked two steps apart from him. It was her last trace of tear that fell on the street. After a second, she felt that same soft, yet hard muscular hand touched her palm. She looked back and yes, it was Dhruv. She had that visible emotion on her face which solely depicted how pure her love was for him.  He stood up and he moved her left blowing hair behind her ear. He cupped her so immensely that her tears again started trickling down the cheeks. He wiped these tears and drew little close to her. He held her firmly and kissed her softly on her forehead. Sneha closed her eyes and she tried hard to memorize this moment. Just for that moment, the world now appeared universe to her. His love completely touched her bones and she got relieved in his serenity. 
She appeared more beautiful in the diamond moonlight and when she opened her eyes, she saw him looking at her. Taking the courage, she asked,’ What happened Dhruv? Why did you stop me?’  ‘Shsssshh….!’ he replied. Sneha stood calmly looking at him. He uttered,’ You know Sneha, even after your confession, everything is just the same, only my mutual feelings have changed. My feelings have grown even stronger than yesterday.  The words you said today, stole my heart.  It’s very difficult for me to even understand the things you’ve been through. Like every man, even I came to know that pain is so evil and dangerous. But, Sneha I was wrong and you made me realize that pain had feelings, which makes people lose their realities. Your confession took to me to face the reality and feel the pain. Rather, it made me to stand up and love you more every day. Your pain captured my heart so intensely that the fear of your separation had stood beside me. Yeahhh…I know I cannot mend the things happened, but I promise to mend them atleast once’.  Sneha who looked at him with satisfaction replied, ’But  Dhruv, real world is different and  at times bitter ’. ‘But, I would want to have this bitter time with you lady. I don’t want to know the real world when I have my real universe with me and my universe starts from you and will solely die with you’, he ended.  She rested her head towards his chest and hugged him very tightly and replied, ’I’m sorry Dhruv because I acted so cruel and thoughtlessly’. ‘You know Sneha, sometimes, it’s not about acting cruel, but more than that it’s about loving so much thoughtlessly .  I love you Sneha and will love you forever’, he said wrapping her warmly. ‘Love you too Dhruv’, she replied with that peace which carried her pain and fear.  Atlast, the two hearts looked so happy even the moon smiled and wrapped them warmly with a soft blanket of shimmering roof.



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19 comments:

  1. Amazing Story.... Awesome End

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  2. Images..... Awesome.... N Story..... Wonderful...

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  3. Nicely written story.... Jab koi baat bigad jayee.... Like ... Movie

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  4. Dhruvv...
    A real man only accepts this...
    I am a real fan of you now.... in love with ur graphics... ur every word depicts the emotions... crystal clear yet amazing sentences....
    You know.. sometimes because of ur such stories... my world really starts to glitter with these beautiful realities...
    Thank you for making me feel so....
    Looking forward for such awesome parts.... :)
    I wish you luck and its my suggestion that if possible do write a book.. you r really amazing at the graphics and such stories which have these beautiful sentences.... :)))

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  5. Awesome..... story like it.....

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  6. Excellent writing skill...
    U can visualize every scene that has written while reading it....
    A nice story with a nice end...

    Really happy ending...

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  7. Good writing skill.. keep it up

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  8. Your strategies are simple but effective, for they describe the obvious. However, many of us have a tendency to overlook the obvious! Thank you so much for sharing your insightful views on this subject.

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  9. Your blog is very informative. Thank you for sharing it. I am just beginning to blog

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  10. Hey... I m Jack from NJ, i m an artist....Wonderful blog!!! I liked the complete article…. great written,Thanks for all the information you have provided…but specially i like u r graphic its full of emotions n .... What i say.... Speechless.... Awesome Graphics.... R U Artist?.... Keep it up

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  11. Thank you all....!! Actually, it's not my work, I have a friend who actually works as a graphic designer. This blog is managed by me and my friend Tushar. So, he works in graphics and I work on making stories... ;) We are highly obliged to have these many endless and prestigious comments...Definitely we'll look forward to bring many more exciting concepts n stories....!! ;)

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  12. And yes,,,suggestions accepted...Will work on writing a book...!! :)

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  13. Great..! Ending..! "Pain had feelings........! " So thoughtful....! ... was listening song while reading this post and the song was.... Jo tu mera humdard hai ...Suhana har dard hai....

    Great Work Chaitali and tushar.

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  14. Hats off you both guyzzz... Keep it up... Waiting for lots of emotions, loveable, educational, inspirational, meaningful, touching stories & blogs... thankx... you both change my vision toward life :)

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  15. First of all, you are an amazing writer & graphic designer. It was like a good book I couldn't put down. I was so intrigued I found myself skipping lines to see what was next (but I stopped myself!).

    What a beautiful story

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  16. I can't believe I've never read this page before, but I'm so glad I stopped to do so today! After reading your story, I feel all warm and fuzzy inside, like I just watched a good romantic movie:)

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  17. I just stumbled upon your blog and your love story was beautiful. As a romance novel junky, it's a great story, it's needs to be in a book.

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  18. What a fantastic story! I really enjoyed reading the chapters, you both create magic with your content & graphics.

    Love your blog and all that it includes.

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  19. i was teary-eyed after reading your love story ... it was so inspiring ... id love to hear more of your love stories ... perfectly written & perfectly visualized by your wonderful graphics.. God Bless always ;)

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