Saturday, 4 October 2014

“Jab koi baat bigad jayee…..!!”

She called him, “Dhruv! Will you please come inside?” But, as he was getting late for the party, he asked her,” Yes, Sneha! What is the matter?”. “Umm Dhruv, I need you. Please help me in tying the knot of my blouse. I’m really helpless with this”, she said dressing her saree. Hearing this, Dhruv was in a very different excitement, may be for him this excitement was to touch her, pleasure her beautiful body and kiss her when he’ll tie up the strings for her blouse with matching crystals. He entered the bedroom in great lust and starred this green-eyed angel, his wife. But, Sneha was dressing quickly because this couple was already late for the party. “Please help me with this Dhruv, I’m trying so hard, but it’s not getting me in”, she said. Dhruv was intertwined to see her beauty in that black and red saree with a broad back blouse. He looked at her and started tying the knot firmly so that she would be held back to him. But, Sneha started dripping with sweat. He touched her softly around her waist, but she was beneath to clean her mind from her past. She quickly turned around and said, ”Dhruv, thank you. Come let’s go to the party. We are getting late”. Dhruv who was shook towards her core beauty, felt some huge indifference and he said, ”But , Mrs. Sneha  Dhruv Gupta, now I’m not in the mood to go now. Come let us be here and spend the next morning together, just you and me”. Sneha after hearing this started stammering and an unknown fear haunted her back yet again. She was still and was about to leave the bedroom. Seeing her drying in fear, Dhruv called her and said, “ Sneha  it’s been 2 months we’ve got married. Eventhough we had an arrange marriage, I wanted to give you that space and time which you needed to open up with me. But, Sneha now my life has a new world and that world will be the glooming universe, until and unless you accept me both soulfully and eternally”. Hearing this, she drove in the place that was far lighter than air. She placed her right hand onto his left hand and a tear broke down her cheek. Dhruv got surprised and cleaned her face with his white handkerchief. After a silence of five minutes she uttered,”You know Dhruv, after we got married I tried many times to pour my heart before you. But, carrying the fear of separation I always struggled with my own anxieties and bonds. I know that your love for me is as pure as water, but my love for you is like that dark blood which is hard to dilute”. Dhruv made her relaxed by saying,” Sneha I firmly believe that when rain comes, it must and  will surely  wash off all the dust in your eyes. So, don’t hesitate and just speak up”. “Dhruv!”, as she was about to put words to her past, Dhruv’s  cellphone started squandering. Still, he was keen in hearing his universe rather than receiving the call from the world. But, Sneha asked him to attend the call. It was Dhruv’s aunt waiting for this newlywed to attend the function. Dhruv with a very composed motion said, ”Don’t worry Sneha, let us be here just you and me”. “No Dhruv, let us go. Mr. Sharma called us with so much delight.  I’ll talk to you after we get back”, she said. Dhruv with a cute smile and cheered happiness agreed upon and both went to attend the party.   
Sneha, she was the embrace to Dhruv. All she believed was to mantle the mist of her skin be touched by his moist hands with desires. She wanted to dance deeply within Dhruv’s softness and that gentle touch. She wanted to smell all those vanilla and orchids to bloom in the scent of her hair. She wanted his hands to run her glowing skin. She wanted his warmth should be very close to her. She wanted to have her heart lean against his chest. She wanted to have that first kiss which smoothly joined the strings of the satisfaction. She wanted to have his joint passion running with hers. She wanted to make love and get love. She wanted to utter in that secret voice that, ”Yes, I’m purely yours “. She wanted to sense that glows of nights and days. She solely and eternally wanted to be of him. But, there was something that made her heart to tear down. There was something that brought nightmares and there was something that made her void and insignificant. 


Dhruv on the other end was very calm and composed. He found someone who turned his world into the universe. He had feelings that very special and beautiful. He wanted to touch her but, only with those same gestures the way he will. He wanted to mirror his reflection in hers. He wanted to pull her with that affection and loyalty. He wanted to unlace her from all the traces of dilemmas. He wanted to absorb her and walk with her throughout the coming mornings and nights. And most certainly, he wanted to make his singular sensation run down with that same warmth inside hers but, only when she was pleasant enough and allowed him to spend all those moments admiring. So, what was her past…? What things actually happened…? Will our relationship sustain or ruin the bond? He kept wondering while he was driving and suddenly, the song, ”Jab koi baat bigad jayee” started playing. Sneha who was sitting at the front seat started looking at Dhruv. She now had enough words, but it was not the sublime time and, and then…Wait for the next episode, coming soon…!!!  

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18 comments:

  1. Please write the next part soon... plz plz....!

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  2. Its so romantic yr..... aise kaise likh lete ho yr tum guyzzz... :)

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  3. Waiting for next part.......

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  4. i am really CURIOUS about next part.....

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  5. Actually i am confused about title and story... whats next?.. Waiting

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  6. Waiting for next episode....

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  7. She now had enough words, but it was not the sublime time and, and then…???????? Plz

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  8. Hey top graphic really matches u r story..

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  9. Hey really very nicely written story....

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  10. excited for the next part... please write it soon.... :)

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  11. Rocking Story....

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  12. Hey its like Movie... Hats off

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  13. From today i m gr8 fan of urs

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  14. i really like your graphics and themes.... jo har bar aap change karte ho ek naye blog ke saath...

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  15. Couple story.... What next ?... Excited

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  16. Gaush!! Thank you for flooding our wall with so lovely comments.... !! Yes, the second part releasing soon...till then keep reading n b happy like :Dhruv n Sneha...;).......

    Regards:-
    newcomersweb....!!

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  17. Good hesitating begining...! late to start ... Going to the next post lets See...what's next...
    :)

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